A perfect heaven
Where birds chirped free
And gulls danced with glee
Where a tear, if dropped
Was caught by many hands
Where a lonely heart, if sighed
Where a child in pain, if cried
Was given a piece of time
To hear out all the grief
and put every mind at peace
They envisioned a life
Where hands joined
To lift up what had fallen
To retrieve what was stolen
Where faith was
The one, the only language
And patience the only law
The emotions, genuine and raw
Where they all sang one tune
and danced in this blessed boon
Yet what they thought
They didn’t get it all
But whatever is quite whole?
And broken as they are
They still call
The hope that comes and spawns
Inspiration that sparks, clings on
And so they vow and ascend
To see it till the end
They limp, they tumble
They get up and walk again
Never letting go ‘coz
They had dreamt of a utopia
And dreams can never be
Lost, given up
Dreams can never be set free..
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Well if you haven’t already guessed, I wrote this one specially for the upcoming ‘Independance Day’ whose glory has been sadly fading more each day
But Long Live PAKISTAN
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15 Comments
well i still believe the dreams our founders saw about our country will come true no matter what the present is if we go with a firm commitment that we as a nation are no less than others and are capable of doing what it takes to be a progressive,just,strong and freedom loving nation.
our belief in being us as a nation will make us what we want to be and inshaAllah we will achieve what we desired in future.
http://syedfaisal.wordpress.com/2008/07/01/you-are-having-a-dream%E2%80%A6/
I Love my country and its love that makes me optimistic in the most depressing of the situations.
I wont say we live in an ideal country but then no country is perfect. We all have contributed to what has become of this land.
@Faisal
Aameen to your prayers and i know that in whatever strange way we have and will progress somewhat, inshaAllah
@Ammar
My point exactly and if even one of us does some good then it matters, coz eventually those around us consciously or subconsciously tend to do what’s right
An old saying goes “…We love not what’s beautiful, but that which we love becomes it…”
Maybe someday the dream in our eyes would come to realization… (Amen)
Beautifully written! =) I’m touched. Long live Pakistan!
hey u ur self ving black dominated theme and told every one to ve theme related to 14 August :@
is our flag black and green?????????? :S
black green flag represents “Green Anarchism”
Nicely written Rabia! Proud to be a Pakistani
@ Saqib
Aameen to ur prayers and as Faiz Ahmed Faiz said, and Iqbal Bano beutifully sang: “Hum dekhain gay…laizm hai keh hum dekhain gay:
@ Hina
Thanx buddy…and Long Live a happy and prosperous Pakland Aameen
@Faisal
Meray Bhai I can hardly ever answer ur questions :-S but khair u’r missing out the fact that my basic theme has been black and so I chose this green line to show the importance of green while maintaining the originality of my blog too
Wht is ‘Green Anarchism’??
@Ali Bhai
Thanx
yeah i am proud to be who I am though a bit lost but we are not a bad lot:-)
well green anarchists are people who are considered anti-civilization or believers of primitivism who believe modern technology or dependency is not good for us but there are techno positive green anarchists who are green anarchists but are not that anti-technology, mostly emphasize on environment.
Green Anarchism is the name for the ideology they follow
“I can hardly ever answer ur questions” :@
itnai burai ya stupid questions bhi nahi hotai
can’t improve much!
Our ancestors saw the dream of a separate homeland for Muslims, which they strove hard to fulfill.
The problem with the generation after them was that they stopped dreaming.
Now the youth have started dreaming again. But can we strive hard, like our ancestors, to fulfill this dream?
And I forgot to say:
Happy Independence Day!
Your blog is interesting!
Keep up the good work!
Hope you had a great independence day!
I think this a great post to pinpoint the positive aspects of Pakistan. Sometimes I wonder why I don’t see anything related to positive and satisfying things of Pakistan. Unfortunately the vast media, isn’t doing much to emphasize on the goodies of Pakistan and as you stated few of many many good things in Pakistan
wishing u better day than good!
@ Faisal
thnx for the info but after asking the question i realized what the heck s Google for
long live http://www.google.com.pk
@SAWJ
Welcome to daybreak and here is an interesting observation u put forward….but u see the younger generation ALWAYS has dreams, it’s that as we grow older tht v start losing hope and energy and getting used to, to the indifference :-S
But thts y v’ll all need to keep giving each other continual reminders
And hope u had a happy independance day too…though there was bomb blast in Lahore
@Yazi
Thnx for the appreciation but i personally think wht matters more than me writing good and pointing is the effect it has on the other…I hope it did the needful somewhat:-)
Welcome aboard
You have a great day too!!
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