They dreamt of a utopia 

A perfect heaven

Where birds chirped free

And gulls danced with glee

Where a tear, if dropped

Was caught by many hands

Where a lonely heart, if sighed

Where a child in pain, if cried

Was given a piece of time

To hear out all the grief

and put every mind at peace

 

They envisioned a life

Where hands joined

To lift up what had fallen

To retrieve what was stolen

Where faith was

The one, the only language

And patience the only law

The emotions, genuine and raw

Where they all sang one tune

and danced in this blessed boon

 

Yet what they thought

They didn’t get it all

But whatever is quite whole?

And broken as they are

They still call

The hope that comes and spawns

Inspiration that sparks, clings on

And so they vow and ascend

To see it till the end

They limp, they tumble

They get up and walk again

Never letting go ‘coz

They had dreamt of a utopia

And dreams can never be

Lost, given up

Dreams can never be set free..

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Well if you haven’t already guessed, I wrote this one specially for the upcoming ‘Independance Day’ whose glory has been sadly fading more each day :-(

But Long Live PAKISTAN

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15 Comments

  1. well i still believe the dreams our founders saw about our country will come true no matter what the present is if we go with a firm commitment that we as a nation are no less than others and are capable of doing what it takes to be a progressive,just,strong and freedom loving nation.

    our belief in being us as a nation will make us what we want to be and inshaAllah we will achieve what we desired in future.

    http://syedfaisal.wordpress.com/2008/07/01/you-are-having-a-dream%E2%80%A6/

  2. I Love my country and its love that makes me optimistic in the most depressing of the situations.

    I wont say we live in an ideal country but then no country is perfect. We all have contributed to what has become of this land.

  3. @Faisal

    Aameen to your prayers and i know that in whatever strange way we have and will progress somewhat, inshaAllah

    @Ammar

    My point exactly and if even one of us does some good then it matters, coz eventually those around us consciously or subconsciously tend to do what’s right :-D

  4. An old saying goes “…We love not what’s beautiful, but that which we love becomes it…”

    Maybe someday the dream in our eyes would come to realization… (Amen)

  5. Beautifully written! =) I’m touched. Long live Pakistan!

  6. hey u ur self ving black dominated theme and told every one to ve theme related to 14 August :@

    is our flag black and green?????????? :S

    black green flag represents “Green Anarchism” :P

  7. Nicely written Rabia! Proud to be a Pakistani

  8. @ Saqib
    Aameen to ur prayers and as Faiz Ahmed Faiz said, and Iqbal Bano beutifully sang: “Hum dekhain gay…laizm hai keh hum dekhain gay: :-)

    @ Hina

    Thanx buddy…and Long Live a happy and prosperous Pakland Aameen

    @Faisal

    Meray Bhai I can hardly ever answer ur questions :-S but khair u’r missing out the fact that my basic theme has been black and so I chose this green line to show the importance of green while maintaining the originality of my blog too :-D

    Wht is ‘Green Anarchism’??

    @Ali Bhai

    Thanx :-) yeah i am proud to be who I am though a bit lost but we are not a bad lot:-)

  9. well green anarchists are people who are considered anti-civilization or believers of primitivism who believe modern technology or dependency is not good for us but there are techno positive green anarchists who are green anarchists but are not that anti-technology, mostly emphasize on environment.
    Green Anarchism is the name for the ideology they follow :)

  10. “I can hardly ever answer ur questions” :@

    itnai burai ya stupid questions bhi nahi hotai :(

    can’t improve much!

  11. Our ancestors saw the dream of a separate homeland for Muslims, which they strove hard to fulfill.

    The problem with the generation after them was that they stopped dreaming.

    Now the youth have started dreaming again. But can we strive hard, like our ancestors, to fulfill this dream?

  12. And I forgot to say:

    Happy Independence Day!

  13. Your blog is interesting!

    Keep up the good work!

  14. Hope you had a great independence day!

    I think this a great post to pinpoint the positive aspects of Pakistan. Sometimes I wonder why I don’t see anything related to positive and satisfying things of Pakistan. Unfortunately the vast media, isn’t doing much to emphasize on the goodies of Pakistan and as you stated few of many many good things in Pakistan

    wishing u better day than good!

  15. @ Faisal

    thnx for the info but after asking the question i realized what the heck s Google for :-) long live http://www.google.com.pk :-D

    @SAWJ

    Welcome to daybreak and here is an interesting observation u put forward….but u see the younger generation ALWAYS has dreams, it’s that as we grow older tht v start losing hope and energy and getting used to, to the indifference :-S
    But thts y v’ll all need to keep giving each other continual reminders :-)
    And hope u had a happy independance day too…though there was bomb blast in Lahore :-(

    @Yazi
    Welcome aboard :-) Thnx for the appreciation but i personally think wht matters more than me writing good and pointing is the effect it has on the other…I hope it did the needful somewhat:-)
    You have a great day too!!


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